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@lrnormiegmailcom
BPO 37904
Nosy @ericvsmith, @miss-islington, @verhovsky, @umoqnier
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  • bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 #16169
  • [3.8] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16234
  • [3.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16235
  • [2.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16236
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    closed_at = <Date 2019-09-18.10:37:37.738>
    created_at = <Date 2019-08-21.11:28:41.989>
    labels = ['easy', 'type-feature', '3.7', 'docs']
    title = 'Suggested edit to Python Tutorial - Section 4'
    updated_at = <Date 2019-09-24.06:41:40.840>
    user = 'https://bugs.python.org/lrnormiegmailcom'

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    actor = 'boris'
    assignee = 'docs@python'
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    closed_date = <Date 2019-09-18.10:37:37.738>
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    creation = <Date 2019-08-21.11:28:41.989>
    creator = 'lrnormie@gmail.com'
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    issue_num = 37904
    keywords = ['patch', 'newcomer friendly']
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    priority = 'normal'
    resolution = 'fixed'
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    superseder = None
    type = 'enhancement'
    url = 'https://bugs.python.org/issue37904'
    versions = ['Python 3.7']

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    1. lrnormiegmailcom commented on Aug 21, 2019

      lrnormiegmailcommannequin
      MannequinAuthor

      Suggest amending the text of the first sentence in Section 4, from:

      "Besides the while statement just introduced, Python knows the usual control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

      to:

      Besides the while statement just introduced, Python follows the usual syntax fir control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

    2. ericvsmith commented on Aug 21, 2019

      @ericvsmith
      Member

      I think I'd prefer "... Python uses the usual flow control statements known from other languages ..."

      It's not just syntax, after all.

    3. umoqnier commented on Sep 15, 2019

      umoqniermannequin
      Mannequin

      I'm interest on this for my first contribution :D

    4. miss-islington commented on Sep 17, 2019

      @miss-islington
      Contributor

      New changeset b574813 by Miss Islington (bot) (Diego Alberto Barriga Martínez) in branch 'master':
      bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169)
      b574813

    5. ericvsmith commented on Sep 18, 2019

      @ericvsmith
      Member

      New changeset 7a2f687 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.8':
      bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16234)
      7a2f687

    6. ericvsmith commented on Sep 18, 2019

      @ericvsmith
      Member

      New changeset 8b907a8 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.7':
      bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16235)
      8b907a8

    7. ericvsmith commented on Sep 18, 2019

      @ericvsmith
      Member

      New changeset c47c8ba by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '2.7':
      bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16236)
      c47c8ba

    8. verhovsky commented on Sep 24, 2019

      verhovskymannequin
      Mannequin

      You changed "control flow statements" to "flow control statements", which is an unrelated concept.

    9. transferred this issue fromon Apr 10, 2022
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