@@ -2562,11 +2562,11 @@
 Together, zero-initialization and constant initialization are called \defn{static
 initialization}; all other initialization is \defn{dynamic initialization}. Static
 initialization shall be performed before any dynamic initialization takes place. Dynamic
-initialization of a non-local variable with static storage duration is either ordered or
-unordered. Definitions of explicitly specialized class template static data members have
-ordered initialization. Other class template static data members (i.e., implicitly or
-explicitly instantiated specializations) have unordered initialization. Other non-local
-variables with static storage duration have ordered initialization. Variables with ordered
+initialization of a non-local variable with static storage duration is 
+\defn{unordered} if the variable is an implicitly or explicitly instantiated
+specialization, and otherwise is \defn{ordered} \enternote an explicitly
+specialized static data member or variable template specialization has
+ordered initialization. \exitnote Variables with ordered
 initialization defined within a single translation unit shall be initialized in the order of
 their definitions in the translation unit. If a program starts a thread~(\ref{thread.threads}),
 the subsequent initialization of a variable is unsequenced with respect to the initialization